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To add to what Cairos said, try shifting his weight a little more so that he looks more bouncy. Right now his pelvis is almost stationary, which adds to the feeling that he is walking instead of shuffling. A little springiness might help get his groove on. Have you been using references while animating? Try looking at a few different ones. Even though you said he's shuffling, looking at Psy's "Gangnam Style" dance might help too, since they're pretty similar.

ShadyDingo responds:

I've made some changed that, hopefully, make it work more than it did before. It may take awhile for the gif to register :) Thanks for the feedback and critique by the way :) It helps a TON! :)

I like the blend of ultra-cartoony with the more realistic figure. I also like how you drew the hands - it's a good hybrid in between the two.

Makes me wonder why she's not wearing pants. Isn't it odd that when it's a woman, it stands out more?

qt-mantis responds:

Ahah probably, it's more of a cartoony thing for characters not to wear pants though.
It stand out more because she has a realistic figure and is sexualised i guess

I like it. Very cute. I personally would have eliminated that "fuzz" in her eyes so that they were solid black, but that is my preference.

Her top and bottom half are both positioned well in their own way, but both of them together make for a very awkward-looking pose.

SukiiK responds:

Hmm....
You're right.

Gotta shade that grass and the house. Other than that, looks quite adorable.

Very nice, but I'm curious why you used Flash. Are you going to animate him?

I'd like it, but I'd do a bit more research on how to properly draw large breasts. They look rather unnatural here. (I feel like her nipples should be just poking out from above the dress with that position as well.)

Good pose, great facial expression. Keep going!

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